The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so touchingly tender and sweet. You made the emotions real; the story surfacing the place where true miracles really occur.
10/19/12
Beautifully done and written to theme. Great job:)
Wow this is a powerful story. It brings up so many emotions in me. I think many might feel pity but that is the last thing on my heart. Amy is blessed not only by Jesus but by her aunt. And Aunt Callie and Doug are blessed by Amy.You did an outstanding job of showing. I could picture the entire scene as I read and again I say Wow!
10/19/12
This is a unique and lovely approach to the topic. Very good.
Splendidly written for topic and with wonderful meaning.
10/20/12
Simply beautiful from beginning to end. It spoke volumes to me.
10/25/12
Beautiful work that shows the strength and limitations of verbal communication, and how God's blessing comes throughb anyway.