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I loved this! Not only is the way you approached the subject hilarious, but the rhymes and the twist on the famous poem added to the humor. Great job!
12/29/11
Perfectly divine! I loved how you turned the "famous poem" read in so many households throughout the years- and turned it into your "own." Great job. Spot on with the topic and great ending.
God Bless~
12/30/11
Lovely poem, but sorry am from a different culture so do not know the famous one.

But I liked yours for what it was.
12/30/11
Oh, this is great. I especially like the arrival of the computer repairman. :)
This is brilliant. It was a fun read. You make rhythm and rhyming look easy which I know it is not.
01/05/12
What a fun and well done parody of “Twas the night before Christmas.” I enjoyed the read!