The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Bravo! Brilliant and beautiful! A wonderful, creative poem that covers the topic well. The pattern, the rhyme and rhythm are perfect. This blessed me as it reminded me of the Gardener's patience and determination to create beauty 'midst the ruin of our lives. Absolutely lovely. Linda Wright
I could feel the worker's toil as I read this; and being a "weekend gardener" I could so identify with what you wrote. One of my favorite lines: "Developed there, as love’s reward."
11/15/09
This poem was excellent! It reminds me of my sister and how every year she sets out to make her garden the best it can be. I liked this very much.
11/19/09
Beautiful poem and wonderful message. May the Gardener root out all the weeds in our gardens! Congratulations!!
Vince.