The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
Wow.
Very nicely done.
11/02/07
I loved this entry for more reasons than one. Mainly because I enjoy seeing the benefits of S.S. from a kid to an adult. Great job!
The reality of mixed messages and misunderstandings touching children and adults is a heartache. You told it well and reminded me to sharpen my listening for signs of disinterest or confusion.
Sunday School can be the grestest or the worst. I'm glad your MC found the greatest after all those years. I truly liked the honesty of your story. It was well crafted.
Well written - I loved watching the MC's progression towards a relationship with Christ.
The different voices of the boy growing to a man is very well done.
I appreciate the honesty in thia. I am so glad he found a class where the members were real and a support to him. Good job.