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Topic: Write in the POETRY genre (05/17/07)
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TITLE: I Will Not Forget | Previous Challenge Entry
By Debora Dyess
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
and praise You,
You are still a God who's worthy of my praise.
When the storms of this world threaten to
engulf me,
I can turn to You and know that You're
unfazed.
I will not forget Your love,
I will not forget Your mercy.
I will hold tight to Your sacrifice,
for that's why I am free.
In the dark and lonely hours of
my midnight,
When my heart longs for what I can't
understand,
I know that I don't need to fear
the darkness,
In the warmth and safety of
Your hand.
I will not forget Your love,
I will not forget Your mercy.
I will hold tight to Your sacrifice,
for that's why I am free.
The truths I hold may sometimes
disappoint me,
But the Truth of You will never
let me down.
And when I stand before You in
Your glory,
I will sing when at Your feet I lay
my crown.
I will not forget Your love,
I will not forget Your mercy.
I will hold tight to Your sacrifice,
for that's why I am free.
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One thought for critique: I think this poem could be even more inspiring if you added more imagery.
Keep up the good work!