The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
I like the format - it is different and eye catching! I liked the rhyme scheme - it keopt mu attention and you selected just the right words. I liked the message too.

Yep - I guess I liked it!
Oh, for JOY! I hear a pipe organ with all the stops out. Then an orchestra, tympani, accompanying a thousand glorious voices! This could be a classic hymn lyric, and I have a feeling we'll all be singing it up there one day! A winner.
05/26/06
Praise the Lord my brother!
I enjoyed reading your article.
05/28/06
Lovely
05/28/06
Brilliant, moving, wonderful writing!
05/28/06
I thought this one was yours. :) What a well-written and comforting message. And I liked your rhyme scheme.
Beautiful.
05/28/06
Linda, this is just breathtaking. What a beautiful, beautiful picture of heaven!
05/29/06
Ahhhh! This is the Linda O. we all love and look forward to reading! Awesome, inspired, uplifting, Glorious - can almost reach out and take His Hand! Wow!
05/29/06
This is so beautiful - I want to sing it!

Your rhyme scheme changed after the 1st verse. But that's the only criticism I can find (and I really had to look for it!) Wonderful, wonderful work!
Very, very nice. Great job.
Breathtaking. I loved it.