The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/16
Enthralling entry! Well done. I enjoyed reading your story, and it was sobering to read your conclusion. Ah, the perils of getting personal via computer screen.
06/02/16
Congratulations, Ellen, on your 4th place EC award.

I'm glad Lucy was able to see through the computer scam.
I had a sense of where this was headed, but I kept reading and crossed my fingers hoping she wouldn't fall for the scam. You did such a great job of bringing your MC to life. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
Congratulations, Ellen, on your 4th place EC! You bring to life an all-to-frequent modern scenario. It astounds me how many people fall for such scams.
06/15/16
Your MC thankfully discovered the hidden meaning behind Marty Monro's pseudonym.