The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice storystory. It had me smiling in all of the right places. Although I could see the ending coming, I still enjoyed your unique take on the topic.
09/05/15
It's fun to relish in the grand surprises of life. Enjoy it while it lasts is a mindset that doesn't happen too often.. This was a delightful piece.
09/05/15
Great story! I like your use of descriptive language to paint your word pictures. Like a previous comment said, the ending was sort of expected, but this is still a sweet story.
09/05/15
Loved the "too good to be true" feel about this whole story, and how you turned Surfers Paradise into Surfers Paradox! Well done.
09/06/15
Great storytelling ability. It was great to have a common name like Smith so you got a penthouse suite.
This is such a clever take and ever so well told. Great piece!
09/07/15
Love this story Ellen, it really brings a smile. Really well written and very enjoyable.
09/09/15
Nicely done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall! Happy Dance!