The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/15
Oh I love this! Still chuckling over this brilliant story. I'd love to think of a clever witty comment but I can't so just - well done, I think this is destined for a high placed ribbon!
08/15/15
Hahaha!!!!! Oh my goodness. I love it. I was chuckling throughout, and busted out laughing at the end. The perfect punch line!!
08/15/15
This is fantastic! It's fun, but yet so real! Great job!
08/15/15
My my, somebody sure got their mords wuddled...
A good run fead for me. Did you get the idea from a news item this week when, at a big official function, our state premier Daniel Andrews was introduced as "Andrew Daniels???"
Well done
Very clever take on the topic and well thought out. Each character was believable and the spoonerisms made me chuckle. Fabulous piece!
08/16/15
How clever and well crafted!!!! Funny, funny:) I like pleasant stories especially when the style makes reading them enjoyable:) Great work:)
08/20/15
Nicely written and perfect spoonerism ending.
08/20/15
Hey Ellen, congratulations on your placement. Great work.
08/21/15
Oh my! I LOVE this. Your creativity and story progression was absolutely delightful. The spoonerisms were off-the-charts fun. :) I'm still smiling. Congrats, Ellen!