The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really sweet. I liked the way you described the Angela and how they were there but also stepped back letting the doctors take care of her. It's a beautiful combination of both how humans use God's gift to help them heal our bodies and how God sends angels to soothe our souls.
06/14/15
Not only is this heart-warming in its sweetness, but it's also, flat out, good writing!

What an encouraging story you've delivered in a most skillful fashion:)

Thx for sharing!
06/15/15
Most children would be fearful but your story helps guide to the idea that angels protect, help but not force their way into the situation.

I liked the way they made space for the hospital staff but still watched.
06/16/15
You've captured a gentle, reassuring picture of how God sends his messengers into our crises, while respecting what needs to keep happening.
I like how your story keeps flowing.
Congratulations on ranking 20th overall! Happy Dance!