The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/15
A beautifully written piece that had me wanting more. Excellent work!
Oh you did a fine job on this piece. It felt vaguely familiar to me and I was eager to read every word. You nailed the topic and did a great job of building up the suspense.
05/02/15
This was a moving piece that was filled with suspense. Your vivid descriptions drew me into the story and wanting me longing for more. Captured the essence of a Mighty Fortress.
05/02/15
Beautiful.

God bless~
05/04/15
Your first line drew me in and kept me riveted throughout the story. Well crafted and intriguing story.
Thank you for sharing this moving story - from the first line to the last, I could picture the scene. The ending was very powerful.
05/07/15
Congrats~
Excellent, inspiring story!
05/07/15
Brilliant in its crafting and descriptiveness - a well-deserved winner. Congratulations.
Intriguing piece, Anne. Congratulations on another job well done.
07/01/15
Wonderfully powerful! The last line is my favorite, and a perfect ending: "a truly impregnable fortress is not built by setting stone upon stone, but by placing hope upon faith."