The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/15
Great job with the topic this well written and powerful piece.

God bless~
Very powerful piece. One slight red ink - if this based on what happened in the Garden of Gethsemane or anywhere else in Scripture, it should be noted as an author's note. That way, if someone then wanted to go and read it themselves, they can.

It's a great take on the topic, and very creative slant on the greatest act of love ever. Awesome piece!
This is the most beautiful love of all--such a wonderful piece for Easter!
Sometimes exhaustion lends the most beautiful hues to a beloved story.
Congratulations on ranking 20th overall! Happy Dance!