The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/14
An imaginative and clever story, with a perfect wrap-up. Well done.

God bless~
10/29/14
I really like your story. I think it has a message in it. Perhaps you could call it an allegory. Very creative and well told.
What a fabulous melding of fantasy and eternal truth!
10/30/14
Congrats!
God BLess~
Congratulations on your placing.This was definitely one of my first choices. So imaginative.