The Official Writing Challenge
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I like it! Brief and to the point. The repeating phrases bring out a good message. Good job.
Luke 18:27: ...The things which are impossible with men are possible with God. Summed up wonderfully in this catchy little poem! Enjoyed!
I love your creativity with this topic. Your poem tops the "clever" chart with this little guy that couldn't quite follow through on being good. His life progression and that same characteristic was so typical, and THEN that day he "gave his heart to the One seeking him..." was so satisfying to this reader (not to mention an excellent poetic technique you used). I love this!
This is so sweet, right on topic, fun, and well-crafted. Great job.
Congratulations on ranking 29 overall!