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12/12/13
I loved reading this piece! Very well done.
12/13/13
Excellent! I love this and how it delightfully fits the topic. And that old elephant, I'm glad he left. LOL! :)
I delighted in this introspective poem. Oh how I can relate. For some reason I allow the stress and worry of this time of year be the center of my thoughts. Your beautifully placed words remind me of what is most important and I've been blessed by your words.
12/14/13
Oh this poem is excellent, such a powerful and true message! Far too many times the stress and preparation for Christmas can overshadow the true meaning! Well done!
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12/17/13
An all too familiar setting captured in a gentle rhythm that gets our eyes refocused where they should be. Well done.
12/17/13
Forgiveness is the key to making the elephant leave . . . every time.

Thank you for this well=written, beautiful poem.
Congratulations on ranking 11 overall!
01/07/14
I love this poignant and relevant poem and message!