The Official Writing Challenge
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In this beautifully written story, the ancient is blended with the modern, making us think--what if John the Baptist were here today? I love the message of salvation and the example of one family who accepted it. So sad, the continuing situation of "almost persuaded" as demonstrated by the narrator.
You've managed to create a piece that provides a multi-layered piece that not only is reflective but powerful in meaning.

Nicely done.

God bless~
This is so wonderfully descriptive that I felt I was there! Beautiful writing, very powerful and a challengingly serious last paragraph. A really great piece.