The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/13
This was intensely enjoyable from start to finish, and held me captive so to speak. Great job.

God bless~
11/20/13
Sometimes it takes hard lessons. Well done. Thank you.
11/21/13
This was one of the best I've read. You took the topic to mean what I did.

I loved this story. Excellent writing!