The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/13
What a cute and clever approach to the topic.
I cannot stand zoos and never attend any...but your entry described it quite well.

Nice job with adorable MC's!

God bless~
11/19/13
Great fun, but with a thought-provoking message. Liked this unusual tale and your title!
Oh I love this! What a brilliant idea! I don't think you said, but I pictured monkeys and so vividly. You nailed the topic in such a fun unique way. This is one of my all times favorite. Happy Dance!!
11/21/13
Congratulations on your well-deserved placing. Others may carp, or sense no porpoise in it, but I reckon it's in a glass all of its own. Tanks for sharing it with us.
I loved this frolic. You are such a naturally gifted writer with a good feel for psychology. I felt I was right there in the cage (maybe I am). A brilliant take on the topic and the ending was clever. Congratulations on the placing.
11/24/13
Creative story about perspective-loved it!
11/24/13
Congrats! God bless~
11/25/13
Lovely story, Allison! It's simple and enjoyable and yet thought provoking too. Congratulations!
I heard this line from Winkey Pratney the other day and thought of your story: " Am I by keeper's brother".