The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/13
Lovely job of bringing these characters and scenarios to life. I can see it all unfolding before my eyes, especially after having my worked in nursing homes my entire career.

Nicely done.

God bless~
11/20/13
Your descriptions put me right there. Very well done. Thank you.
We have just put my mother-in- law into a nursing home and realize the importance of those small things like giving a glass of water, a smile, a hullo, turning on a favorite TV program. Many have no-one to help them. Good writing! Well-deserved prize.
11/24/13
Superbly written from the title all the way through the MC's murmuring to your convicting ending.
the line "I can care about someone besides myself" said it all. Just loved it-congratulations on your EC placing.
11/24/13
Congrats! God bless~