The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/13
Great entry, great message, and completely realistic dialogue and content.

Nicely done. God bless~
10/29/13
We need more teachers like this - and kids who will take them up on it. Great story.
Oh I love this! You did a brilliant job of pulling me into the story. I even found myself holding my breath at times. Congratulations on ranking 13 overall! Happy Dance!