The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/13
Very interesting. I have heard of angels unexpectedly paying bills for people before, but never (as it seems in this case) taking tests for them. I love the ending to this story and the scripture quotes placed at the end. Nice work.
09/19/13
That was quite an unusual and interesting analogy of Jesus sacrifice for us—and I really liked it! Jesus indeed was tested in our place and thankfully His perfect score blots out our failures! I enjoyed this!
This is great. You nailed the topic and did so in such a fresh and interesting way. The only thing I would suggest is to remember to start a new para each time someone different speaks. You did a great job and your subtle message was the best of all. Congratulations on ranking 19 overall!