The Official Writing Challenge
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How powerfully moving! My heart was in my throat all the way through this magnificent piece. I felt each line as if it were directed to me. What a gripping powerful entry.
09/01/13
Beautiful, powerful, and wonderfully crafted. Thanks so very much!
09/02/13
Powerful clarity.
09/02/13
I am also not a poet, so I cannot offer anything objectively helpful. But I enjoyed it; that must count for something! :)

Thanks for sharing this.
09/03/13
I enjoyed this very much. I'd say you have a knack for this kind of writing. Strong, powerful message. Great Job.
09/04/13
Your poem is a powerful telling of the gospel message. Well done.
09/04/13
I thought your poem stood out for it's clarity and potent, lovely rhyming verse.