The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/13
I absolutely love this poem of “expanding awareness”!! So of course you have the perfect title! You have managed to say so much; give so much vision and evoke so much thought; in so few words it is amazing! I particularly like our awareness in Heaven summoned up as “Enveloped in Awe” & “Enveloped in God” — such enormous comfort and contemplation wrapped up in those short phrases! Just an AWESOME job on this!
A piece that expands right before the reader's eyes, and swells in the reader's heart. Great job.
07/27/13
Your beautifully penned work makes my heart sing. Who can help but continue worshipping Him well after the piece has finished.
07/27/13
I love the idea of being "enveloped" in faith. and this is so beautifully written I had to read it several times. The words describe such wonder at life and the beauty of knowing God.

Blessings, Lynn
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
07/30/13
Ohhh absolutely lovely and breathtaking!
08/01/13
Congratulations on your 3rd placing in the Master level! Very excellent writing, my friend.!
08/01/13
CONGRATULATIONS YVONNE! I just knew this was a winner.
08/01/13
Congrats Yvonne! God bless~
08/01/13
Congrats on your 3rd place.
08/01/13
Congratulations, Yvonne, on placing second for this well-deserved entry. God bless!
08/01/13
Creative and simply beautiful to read. Loved it. Congratulations.
08/01/13
Yay for you!
08/01/13
This entry keeps on growing, and takes us with it. Well done on your third placing.
08/01/13
Congratulations on your EC! Well deserved for great writing.
08/14/13
Gorgeous work, Vonnie. Love the progression of this and your wonderful message. Congrats on your EC!