The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/13
Fun read! Just had to read it out loud to get the pleasure out of all the thump-thump-thumpities! (How do you make thumpity plural?)
Delightful!
06/11/13
This clever villanelle is filled with action and those thumps, bumps, and whacks, echo with each line. The humorous story line gives me a smile with each read. This is definitely meant to be read aloud, multiple times. Super!
06/13/13
This made me smile really wide. It's almost akin to "Dr. Seuss" except for adults, although I think the rythym would amuse children too when read aloud.

I loved it.

God bless~