The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/13
This was a fun and a delight to read. Thank you.

God bless~
This was a well-written, enjoyable read. I found myself grinning ear to ear as I was reading. Great job!
05/27/13
What a wonderful way you have of telling a story, and what a great unique take on the topic. Very well done! Very original.
05/27/13
This is so cute!

My only suggestion, and I'm guilty of it to, (I'm also sure you know this) would be to get rid of the words "said" and "asked." Show us what they are doing, instead.

I love how the twins and their group accepted the MC without question. Nice job.
I like the creative way you chose to illustrate "ding-dong."
Congratulations for ranking 10 in your level and 12 overall!