The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/13
Such an interesting approach to the topic, you had me wondering where this was going. I was surprised at the ending, and that very rarely happens. Nicely done.

God bless~
05/27/13
This is so cute. Who knew turkeys could be such trouble? :)
05/27/13
This left me with a smile on my face. Great story with two wonderful characters. I feel like I know those two and that happens when a story is superbly written like this one. Very well done!
05/27/13
Nicely done. I really enjoyed your spy tale.
You did a great job with characterization in this entertaining story.
Congratulations for ranking 20 overall!