The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/13
Wow, what a sad way to hear such important news. Heartache, twice over for the mother and daughter. The way you wove so much into such limited space is evidence of a talented writer. I was completely surprised by the ending. I wanted to read more--I'm applauding this one.
05/17/13
What a gripping, heart-rending story really well told. It held me from start to finish, and I did not see the twist coming. Thank you.
05/26/13
Wow, Sawa! Spectacular bit of writing. You have so much emotion, then the disclosure that rocks your MC's world and spun this reader. Excellent! Powerful!