The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a sad way to hear such important news. Heartache, twice over for the mother and daughter. The way you wove so much into such limited space is evidence of a talented writer. I was completely surprised by the ending. I wanted to read more--I'm applauding this one.
What a gripping, heart-rending story really well told. It held me from start to finish, and I did not see the twist coming. Thank you.
Wow, Sawa! Spectacular bit of writing. You have so much emotion, then the disclosure that rocks your MC's world and spun this reader. Excellent! Powerful!