The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/13
Lovely piece with such true emotion. Very nice!
Well written. As a mom, I can understand the emotion in this piece. I have a little heart shaped note in my Bible that says, "Happy Muthers Day" I cherish it, misspelling and all!
Exquisite . . .
You have a true gift, your writing is like a precious jewel to me. It never fails to "pierce me in a down-deep - place." The special notes and cards we get as mothers truly are life's best gifts. This was a true joy to read, although it put a lump in my throat... Congratulations on placing 22nd overall. Have a "Happy Dance" in Jesus this weekend. Blessings to you.
Oh this is beautiful. I really commend you with your ending. I was sure that hidden note in the towel would have been the last note he ever wrote. By not going where many would you made these notes stand out in a way probably only a mother could truly understand. This was spectacular! Congratulations on ranking 22 overall!
02/22/13
Emotions laid bare in this tender piece, without getting too schmalzy. Very well-written.