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You can't tell me anything about deja-vu; I've seen all that stuff before!
But thank you for the fun you have put into this piece, and for gently drawing us through it as you lift our sights beyond the mundane and the quirky to that moment from whnce we will know even as we are known. Well done.
Hmmm. This story seems familiar! Seriously, lovely job and I truly enjoyed this very much. Nicely done.

God bless~
This moment of whimsy completely captivated me. I had to smile at all the sights, smells, and sounds you planted in my brain. Your ending made me smile. And now I want to read it again, to see if I have a moment of "Deja Vu" :)
This poem is cute and sweet and funny. Adorable. :)
Wow! I really loved this piece. You have this perfect sense of timing with your humor.I am impressed, entertained and touched all at once. Congratulations for placing 11th in level four and 12 overall!