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A lovely poem to honour the Creator and to give thanks for one of the most beautiful of blooms! I enjoyed this.
11/30/12
Your word choices and alliteration adorn this prayer beautifully. Favorites are "bud to bloom" and "purpose to bring people pleasure" I love your closing verse in relation to your poem. We can learn much from a rose.
Your poem expresses exactly why I have roses in my gardens. That they "know" and are aware of not only their beauty but beauty is as beauty does - speaks of the humility of these most beautiful and fragrant of flowers.
Your poem echos the prayer of my heart.
"I pray my beauty tells the story
Of riches found within Your glory,"
Beautiful writing.
12/04/12
Lovely words, lovely message, lovely poem. Thanks.
God bless~
A beautiful piece. A sincere prayer. Thanks for sharing.