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11/29/12
A lovely poem to honour the Creator and to give thanks for one of the most beautiful of blooms! I enjoyed this.
11/29/12
Your word choices and alliteration adorn this prayer beautifully. Favorites are "bud to bloom" and "purpose to bring people pleasure" I love your closing verse in relation to your poem. We can learn much from a rose.
Your poem expresses exactly why I have roses in my gardens. That they "know" and are aware of not only their beauty but beauty is as beauty does - speaks of the humility of these most beautiful and fragrant of flowers.
12/04/12
Your poem echos the prayer of my heart.
"I pray my beauty tells the story
Of riches found within Your glory,"
Beautiful writing.
12/04/12
Lovely words, lovely message, lovely poem. Thanks.
God bless~
A beautiful piece. A sincere prayer. Thanks for sharing.