The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. There's nothing better to describe empty nest than nothing but dust under the couch. Funny how we can miss those little nuisances once they're gone.
11/25/12
A nice whimsical touch here, though I feel you did have plenty of 'broom' left to add to an entertaining read. ;-)
11/27/12
I loved this! Thanks.
God bless~
11/28/12
This is lovely. It evokes feelings so beautifully with only a few words. I enjoyed it a lot.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level four and 11th overall! (So close!)