The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is a powerful piece. It's filled with wonderful advice and the words flow so beautifully. It really tugged at my heart and made me rethink my life's goals and dreams. Powerful poetry.
11/25/12
Starting from a threat, you wove back through to a promise and clearer values. I would have liked to see something about the challenge of undoing the habits that led to the wastage, but the word count could have easily squeezed you out. Well done.
11/27/12
Wow- so powerful...thanks!
God bless~
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