The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 698 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
10/25/12
Beautiful poem, lovely way of expressing reverence to our Lord. I liked the style of the poem as well.

Thanks. God Bless~
10/25/12
I like how each word felt like a droplet of water into the next one, and the word water sat on the outstretched tongue. This is very creative with a great ending message to share the living water with others.
Wow! This is an awesome piece. You did an outstanding job of reversing each line and going from fear to despair and then hope to safety. This kind of format really stands out and your message will touch many.
Lovely poem and beautiful message!
10/26/12
Beautiful poem with a beautiful message. I liked how your MC, as soon as he received the water wanted to help others... the evidence of Jesus in his life.

God bless!
10/28/12
So very moving - love this.
Congratulations Vonnie on an excellent poem and an EC--so proud of you!
11/03/12
Ah simply lovely! A joy to read and mull over a few times.
11/03/12
Your message is beautiful, Vonnie. Congrats on your EC!