The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/12
Love the title! This was an unusual and interesting read. It kept my attention throughout. Nicely done.

God Bless~
09/16/12
You give new meaning to the word "Barbeque," although I'm not sure how well you fit the topic or showed with clarity the point of the story. I noted "sick" when you meant, "sic."

I like your last line.
Congratulations on ranking 9th in Masters and 13 overall!