The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/12
With your great opening sentence, this reads like an up to date Psalm Verna. What a catalogue you so graphically describe. What a great last verse of the Sovereignty of God, His control, justice and judgement. Brilliantly written. (Thank you too for your lovely comment - you would have got very wet if you had been here!)
06/07/12
Amen! I loved this. Especially the last part. Fabulous job. Thanks.

God bless~
06/07/12
His love is steadfast forever!!!!! Thank you for that. You did a marvelous job with this poem. I hope to one day to be able to write as boldly and as well as you do. thanks
06/14/12
Intense. Profound. True. What can I say? Excellent job.