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05/18/12
This was such a good story. I loved the way the MC was lost in his reverie of his former life, before going into his "permanent life." It was powerful and an excellent job of what it might be like as one slips away into paradise.

The MC's wife running towards him and the angelic voices singing...Something we all think about. And, I am sure many of us think about our "loved ones" that have gone before us, and one day to be reunited with them, in the presence of the one true living and sovereign God. Great job.

Excelllent. Thank you.

God Bless
05/20/12
Great imagery and a wonderfully told story of redemption.

I also like how you slyly slipped in at the end an observation about how there are no paparazzi in heaven. :)
Hi -

Thank you for this meaningful piece that reminds us of keeping things in perspective.

Yes, indeed, we need such reminders.

I love your ending, too.
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
05/24/12
Mmm... Cinnamon children. What a delicious work of art. I loved reading this. Congratulations!
05/24/12
Beautiful story. Well done and congratulations!