The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/12
This was so good from start to finish. I loved the smart lines and words that delivered the powerful message.

Loved it. Thanks.

God bless~
05/12/12
Stop spying on me! :)

Great job of shining a light on those of us who refuse to put effort into improving those areas that always seem to make us stumble. And you are so right, all we need do is lean on Him and face those failings in our life. Think how different things would be if we turned those parts around! Great job!
This is packed full of emotions laid out beautifully on the page. I wanted to reach through the screen and hug the MC but near the end I see that Jesus did just that.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 4 and 14 overall!
I like the voice of this piece and I can relate to the story too well. We all have our areas of weakness, but God is very patient. We need to trust in Him and keep trying. Well written.