The Official Writing Challenge
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This wonderful story warms the heart and challenges the soul. I could clearly see the darling little girl and her "check."
05/03/12
We all should take the time to listen to children. They can cut right to the heart of the matter, for sure. Sweet, sweet story. Nice job!
Very touching and well written story. Excellent description and emotion brought through the entire tale. Well done.
05/05/12
"out of the mouth of babes." Loved this darling story with a powerful message. Excellent job. Thank you.

GOD Bless~
05/08/12
Your details gave me a perfect picture of the scene. This is such a sweet story and one to remember. Great job!