The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
A delightful tale well told! I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
02/02/12
Awww. I love this! Great story, delightfully entertaining- and made me smile throughout.
God Bless~
02/02/12
I love everything about your story! Super work!
02/06/12
What a lovely story, and so well written; surprised ending and all. And the title - I don't think you could have picked a better one. I also loved how you weaved that Cherry Pie into the narrative. Cupid strikes with a Cherry Pie.:-)

The idea that there's life after retirement always fascinates me; and is so relevant with the increased numbers of over 60's. Nice!

Haha, love this! Noticed a couple of small grammar issues and a male is a widower rather than a widow, but this was a delightful story. Very cute. Loved the twist of the pie coming full circle.
Such a sweet story and well told! I enjoyed it very much!
02/09/12
What a great story! I was smiling wide by the end. :-D