The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Hahahahahahaha...Nicely done! This had me smiling all the way through. I enjoyed this. Especially the apology at the end!

Good job. God bless~
I really enjoyed this. It was quite clever. I think I still have that picture book somewhere. It brought back sweet memories.
11/17/11
Lots of energetic word pictures here, and a lot of fun as well.
Well done! Love the rhythm and rhyme and creativity.
11/18/11
Fun, fun, fun read! Creative and clever! I too loved the apology at the end! Great job!
11/18/11
Oh so much fun! I smiled and laughed and cringed all the way through. The rhythm was perfect, but the thought of Spam parfait gives me a shudder :) Really nice job!
11/20/11
I enjoyed this too. Very funny and creative!
I'm still trying to wrap my mind around spam fudge parfaits! I am impressed by the author's fantastic creativity--and managing to make it right on topic. An absolutely fun read!
Woo Hoo for the winners and three cheers for my "pardner"
Congratulations for ranking 8th in Masters and 9th overall! Great job on your EC.
12/04/11
Beth, congratulations on your wins with this whimsically created piece. You surely have a gift for making readers smile with your word-wit. Great job!
12/05/11
I've read this a few times through and the first word that comes to my mind is...DELICIOUS!! And then FUN, and then JUST WONDERFUL!