The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/11
oh my! I'm laughing here. My face may have even gotten red when I got to the "Did she really write that?" LOL!!! This was a WHOLE LOTTA FUN to read. I could picture every scene as he read her blog. Then your ending was a welcome relief, cause both of your characters were endearing and I didn't want them to have "a problem." :) Super creative! Wonderful writing.
This is hysterical! I could so see this happening. I loved your use of the words sew and embroider. Very clever.
11/07/11
This is so comical and such a fun story you’ve woven around the topic! But it also shows the truth that we can take with a grain of salt all we read on the internet, as I sure countless people embellish what they write, with little truth to it – written just to get attention. Great job on this.
11/09/11
Fantastic job - it was as if a movie scene was unfolding before my eyes! Excellent and well written, and I loved the ending which told "all would be okay" with the two. Loved it

God Bless you~
11/13/11
After reading about all that mess left everywhere, it's good to get to the end, to see that things are going to "pick up" from here.
A good fun read - from a husband's perspective.