The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/11
Oh, I really like this. I especially love the repeated last line, and then the adaptation of the last line for the last stanza. Great job.
09/19/11
Sounds like my life:) Cute poem. Very nice job, as always.
This is so good. Poetry isn't always my favorite genre but thiswas pure genius with a touch of humor and a grand message.
09/19/11
Oh I love this witty, well written poem! I had to laugh out loud at stanza 5 as it so reminded me of a certain president, that I wish had not rushed in! LOL This was so entertaining and not one bit of it felt forced to fit the challenge! Kudos! Terrific!
09/20/11
I really love the humour of this - what a great poem. It certainly brought the smiles but the last verse - ah! just great!
09/22/11
Congratulations. God bless~
09/22/11
Congratulations Verna on your well deserved level and EC win!
09/22/11
Congratulations, Verna!
09/22/11
I love his one, Verna. Such a fun way to make a great point. We'll be living where angels tread very soon, I'm guessing:) Congratulations on you EC!
09/22/11
CONGRATULATIONS! This poem is simply WONDER! And I SO relate!
09/22/11
Congratulations! Wonderful poem.
09/26/11
Verna, I love your message. Your last stanza uplifts. Beautiful work! Congratulations dear twin.