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Wow - this was exciting! I'd love to read this expanded into an entire novel. I just love the message of hope you infused into the end of the story. This young reporter's life and career was essentially over. But with God, there was a chance for another beginning, and the creation of something beautiful from the rubble of her life. You definitely kept my attention!
Great story! I love how your interesting details added to Amanda's character.
I really enjoyed this, didn't want it to end! I am ready for chapter two! :) Great job!
Good story telling. I liked how God was able to use Ryan's quarter to bring her hope.
A great "teaser." I have no doubt this will continue to be a great story!
Moved beyond words.