The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
Awesome creativity here! I wish you had more words to flesh out this story - I wanted to know so much more.
08/26/11
Oh wow! I loved this. I wanted it to keep going and was disappointed to see the end:( Good job!!!
08/27/11
A really exciting story that was a good read. I knew when Long hadn't dived in at the start, but thrust off, that there was a catch.
Your title is perfect for this very interesting story.
Very enjoyable story. You kept my attention throughout and closed with an ending that satisfied. Well done.
08/29/11
Great story with strong characters. (A very small point about "bazaar" circumstances; which should read "bizarre;" unless you plan to sell this story in a crowded marketplace.8-))
08/30/11
Great story, I was cheering him on along with his sister. I enjoyed it. God bless~
08/31/11
What a wonderful, well written, heart-warming story!
Enjoyed beginning to end!
I love this story. All three of my kids are swimmers and we always joked that my oldest worked very hard to come in last place.
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level 4!