The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute story. Having that same 'crime' under my belt, I suspected that was the direction you were going. Nicely written and quite a cute ending.
never guessed what it was...so needless to say this story held my attention to the end. Very clever
08/01/11
This entry built the suspense about your MC's judgement on a big scale, but it was worth the weight. I especially enjoyed the planned venue for (literally) chewing over then verdict! Good fun read!
08/04/11
Oh, the tension!! Brilliant - and all too familiar. Well done and congratulations on very well deserved placing.
08/04/11
Riveting! I suspected the lady in white was a nurse or medical person but didn't even make a guess about the device. So true...most of us dread that device in the doctor's office. Well done. Congrats on your placement!
08/04/11
My first thought when I read about this topic was to write a story about a refrigerator raid, and the ultimate "punishment". I didn't, you did it your way, and well.:-) Congrats on your win!
08/05/11
I totally understand the dread of this device. Whoever invented this abomination? :)

Congratulations on a well told tale!