The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
I really liked the twists and turns to this story. The last paragraph was a complete surprise.

The characters were well developed and this week's story was used in a creative way.
I really enjoyed this story. I was hoping for an ending like that.
This was a fun story. I enjoyed the way the story developed and turned one way and then the next. Great ending!