The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent and thoughtful message about appearances. And then a great chuckle at the end!
05/27/11
I thought this was a fun take on the topic. I am glad God made us all a little different, so we can sing another tune.
05/27/11
I love your feathered take on the topic! :) Your phrases and word pictures are outstanding! And once again, your message is the crown on your work!
05/28/11
Brilliant! A great message, and the ending was unexpected and so very funny! I may just have to print this one out and put it on my fridge for a daily morning chuckle - and a very timely reminder that we are all so very precious to our Father.
05/28/11
Loved the way you inspired us with a lesson on appearances and left us laughing. Great job as usual!
05/30/11
Love the mix of simplicity and depth as you tell it like it is.
What a dlightful entry! No wonder you placed high! I can't wait to see how this is illustrated in your new book. Oh, to be an illustrator! I love it!
06/02/11
VernaJ, I was so pleased to see this as an Editor's Choice. Heart-felt ongratulations, twin! <3
Excellent entry! Congrats!