The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/11
Wow - so much here. I think I need to read this several times to get all the layers.
05/17/11
Very intense and dramatic. You kept the suspense going right up to the end.
This was lovely. I was hanging onto every word as I tried to figure out the mystery- Congratulations on placing 11th in masters and 20th overall.
05/21/11
Fillled with intense emotion and sensitivity. You stirred my heart.