The Official Writing Challenge
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I am sitting here puzzling over the ending. Why is the police officer smiling if this came to a bad ending? did I miss something?
Still, the writing drew me in and carried me along.
OK< duh, the light goes on as I read it again!! Now we really have a chilling ending. Good writing!
This drew me in from the beginning and the twist at the end was twisted but compelling. Great writing!
Oh, man! You totally hooked me on this one - I assumed this would end up with a nice, happy, learned-her-lesson type of ending. Nope! You literally made my mouth hang open with your superb ending - I've got chills! Excellent job!
Excellent! I can see the team from "Criminal Minds" already getting their gear together to come and, hopefully, rescue her and catch the crooked cop!
Wow sounds like an Agatha Christie mystery to me... Had me hooked :)
Congratulations for placing 12th in Masters and 17 overall!