The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, you have amazing drama in this! --And it makes your ending all the more powerful. Your words mesmerize. This is so creative for the topic.
Incredibly powerful and vivid. I was totally engaged.
I like this. Powerful! Thank you.
Excellent! You held the tension and my interest with masterful flair. Well done!
Wow! What a dramatic and powerful story. The conclusion was brilliant.
Hurray on your first Masters entry! This is amazing. Captivating. Well done.
Wow, loved the surprise - I didn't see it coming! What a punch. :-)
Great story. You held my attention to the end.
Very well written. I did see the end coming, but it didn't change the power of the finale one bit for me.
You definitely belong in Masters---Wonderful story---start to finish!
You did a nice job showing the MCs conflict. I tend to avoid memory for the same reason. Often it is easier for me to forgive others than myself. Thanks for the reminder.
Where is the I love button. This was great. I didn't have the end figured. I was just along for the ride. And enjoyed it all. I hope this does well.
You definitely have a talent for writing out-of-the-box! :) Love the ending! Hope you rank high on your first Masters story!
Congratulations on placing 26th overall!